dist the rose

Please give me some constructive criticism if you have any! My grasp on canon is kind of shoddy at the moment and I could do with some good review. Until then, your assistance would be very much appreciated. Am I doing him a little too over the top? Am I too subdued? Do you think he should be smarter or dumber in a certain context? Let me know.

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